Saturday, March 29, 2025

Sugar Bay: Echoes Pt 3 of 5

The fog hung low over Sugar Bay that night, thick as day-old chowder and just as suffocating. In the warm glow of the Carlyle Café, Milinah leaned over the counter, her pen scrawling numbers on an order slip. Business was steady—locals huddled at corner tables, nursing cups of coffee while the sea air clawed at the windows. Outside, the streetlamps barely penetrated the mist, their halos shrinking like they were afraid of what was out there.

Milinah’s thoughts drifted, as they often did, to the lighthouse and its silent testament to secrets she wished she’d never unearthed. The whispers about her sister Mariah swirled in her head like the fog itself—always there, always just out of reach. She couldn’t shake the weight of her last conversation with Declan, his voice low and grave as he laid out the truth—or what passed for it in a town like this. Sugar Bay had more ghosts than residents, and every one of them had a story to tell.

The bell above the café door chimed softly, startling her. She glanced up, expecting a customer, but the doorway was empty. Just more fog seeping in. Shaking her head, she returned to her work, the scratch of her pen the only sound in the café.

Then she heard it—a voice, faint and feather-light, brushing against her ear. She froze, her breath caught in her throat. It wasn’t the murmur of a customer or the distant hum of the ocean. It was close, intimate, as if whispered from just over her shoulder.

“Milinah…”

She turned sharply, her heart leaping, but there was no one there. Just the empty café behind her, the chairs stacked neatly, the scent of coffee lingering in the air.

“Hello?” she called out, her voice trembling. Silence answered her.

She pressed a hand to her chest, willing her heart to steady. It had to be her imagination, she told herself. Too many sleepless nights, too many unanswered questions. But the way the hairs on the back of her neck stood on end told her otherwise.

The voice returned over the next few days, each time clearer, each time more insistent. It whispered snatches of words she couldn’t quite piece together. By the third night, she could no longer ignore it. The whispers spoke of places—locations in Sugar Bay she hadn’t thought about in years. The old library, the abandoned fish cannery, the crumbling boathouse on the edge of town. And they carried something else, something that made her knees weak and her breath hitch—a familiarity she hadn’t felt in years. The voice was Mariah’s. It had to be.

Milinah didn’t wait long to bring Declan into the fold. He listened in his usual way, leaning back in his chair, his eyes hooded but sharp. He didn’t mock her or dismiss her. No, Declan Cross had seen enough of Sugar Bay’s shadows to know better than that.

“So you’re saying your sister’s giving you directions,” he said, rolling a cigarette between his fingers. “Through whispers. From the fog.”

Milinah nodded, clutching her mug like it might ground her. “I know how it sounds, but it’s her, Declan. I know it is. She’s… she’s trying to show me something.”

Declan struck a match, his eyes narrowing as he lit the cigarette. “Or someone’s trying to lead you somewhere. Question is, do they want you to find something—or to end up like your sister?”

The words hit her like a gut punch, but she couldn’t argue. Declan had a way of cutting to the quick, even if it left you bleeding.

The next morning, they followed the first whisper’s clue to the old library. It had been shuttered for years, the windows boarded up and the front door chained. They crept inside through a broken side window, their flashlights cutting through the gloom. The air was thick with dust and the scent of mildew, the shelves standing like forgotten sentinels.

In the far corner, they found it—a single book lying on the floor, its title catching the light: The Fog’s Edge. Milinah’s hands trembled as she picked it up, the weight of it feeling unnatural. Inside the cover was an inscription, the ink faded but legible: “For M., the truth lies within.”

“This is a breadcrumb,” Declan muttered, his tone grim. “Someone’s leaving a trail. Question is, where does it lead?”

The books kept coming, each one discovered in a new location whispered to Milinah in the dead of night. Shadows at Dusk. The Watcher’s Oath. The Silence Beneath. Each title more ominous than the last, each inscription hinting at a larger truth, a final answer waiting just out of reach. The trail drew them deeper into Sugar Bay’s underbelly, into places that felt alive with secrets and malice.

By the time they reached the old boathouse, Milinah’s nerves were frayed. The whispers had grown louder, more insistent, their tone shifting from guiding to urgent. The fog seemed denser here, curling around their ankles like something alive.

The book they found inside was different. Its cover was black and featureless, its pages blank save for a single line scrawled in the center of the first page: “The answers are in the mist.”

“What the hell does that mean?” Declan growled, his jaw tight. He didn’t like mysteries he couldn’t solve with a punch or a bullet.

Milinah’s voice was barely above a whisper. “It means we have to go back. To the lighthouse.”

Declan cursed under his breath, but he didn’t argue. The lighthouse had been the start of all this, and now it seemed it would be the end.

They returned that night, the fog so thick it felt like wading through molasses. The lighthouse loomed above them, a silent sentinel against the dark. As they stepped inside, the whispers swelled, surrounding them, filling the air like a chorus.

Milinah clutched Declan’s arm, her breath coming in quick, shallow gasps. “Do you hear it?” she asked, her voice trembling.

“I hear it,” he said, his eyes scanning the shadows. His hand rested on the revolver at his hip.

The whispers led them upward, the spiral staircase groaning under their weight. At the top, they found the lantern room empty, save for the fog that pressed against the cracked glass, swirling like it had a mind of its own.

Then they saw it—something moving in the mist. A shape, tall and thin, its edges blurred but unmistakably human. It stepped closer, and the air grew colder, the whispers rising to a fever pitch.

Milinah’s voice broke the spell. “Mariah?” she called, her voice cracking with hope and fear.

The shape hesitated, its head tilting as if listening. Then it lunged.

Declan’s hand was a blur, his revolver roaring, the sound deafening in the confined space. The shape recoiled, the mist dissolving around it, but the whispers remained, echoing in their ears.

When the fog cleared, they were alone. The books, the whispers, the shape in the mist—it had all led to this moment, and yet they were no closer to the truth.

Milinah sank to the floor, her shoulders shaking with silent sobs. Declan knelt beside her, his hand resting on her back. “We’ll figure it out,” he said, his voice softer than she’d ever heard it. “This isn’t over.”

And deep down, she knew he was right. Sugar Bay didn’t give up its secrets easily. But neither would they.

 

 

Echoes – Part 2: Into the Fog

The fog came down heavier than usual that evening, blanketing Sugar Bay in a suffocating veil of damp gray. Declan leaned against his car, his coat collar pulled high against the chill, waiting for Milinah. The whispers had returned to her in fragmented bursts, and this time, they carried the name of a place neither of them could ignore—the Carlyle boathouse. It had long since fallen into disrepair, its doors warped and its roof bowed from decades of neglect, but for Milinah, it held the weight of her sister’s memory like an anchor.

As she approached, her silhouette hazy in the fog, Declan could see the resolve etched on her face, shadowed by something deeper—fear, perhaps, or hesitation. She clutched the black book they’d found at the boathouse with white-knuckled determination, as if the answers it promised could shield her from the unknown ahead.

“They want us to find something there,” she said, her voice steady but quiet. “It’s where she… where it started.”

Declan nodded, flicking the last embers of his cigarette away. “Then we finish it.”

 

The road to the Carlyle boathouse was narrow and unforgiving, winding through thick trees that shivered under the weight of the fog. Milinah said little during the drive, her gaze fixed out the window as if searching for some sign—anything that could connect her to Mariah again.

The boathouse was even worse than Declan had imagined. Its sagging timbers were riddled with holes, the entire structure leaning like a drunk who’d lost his last crutch. As they stepped inside, the air grew colder, carrying the scent of mildew and seawater. Declan’s flashlight revealed a stretch of crates piled haphazardly near the back wall, each marked with an anchor-and-moon symbol he’d seen before.

“They’re everywhere,” Milinah murmured, tracing the insignia with her finger. “This town, the fog—they’re all connected, aren’t they? Mariah knew it, and she wanted to tell me.”

Declan crouched to inspect the crates, prying one open to find stacks of weathered books bound with twine. Their spines carried cryptic titles like The Fog’s Gatekeeper and Secrets Beneath the Tide. He pulled one free, flipping through brittle pages filled with maps, handwritten notes, and diagrams that painted a chilling picture of Sugar Bay’s history. The fog wasn’t just natural—it was cultivated, controlled. And it wasn’t just hiding secrets; it was protecting something.

 

As they continued searching, Milinah heard it again—Mariah’s voice. Soft and fleeting, it swirled through the fog like smoke, leading her deeper into the boathouse. Declan followed, his flashlight cutting through the mist, until they reached a trapdoor hidden beneath the warped floorboards. Milinah froze, her breath hitching as the whispers grew louder, more insistent.

Declan crouched, his hand brushing hers in quiet reassurance before he yanked the trapdoor open. Beneath it lay a staircase descending into darkness, the damp air rushing up like the breath of something waiting below.

“You ready for this?” Declan asked, his tone steady but tense.

Milinah nodded, stepping forward into the void. “I have to be.”

 

The space beneath the boathouse was worse than they’d imagined—an underground room filled with shattered lanterns, rusted tools, and walls scrawled with cryptic symbols. In the center of the room stood a weathered table, its surface littered with books, photographs, and papers stained with time and water.

Milinah froze as she recognized one of the photographs. It was her sister, standing beside a man whose face had been scratched out, just like the one they’d found at the lighthouse. Beside it lay another book titled Echoes in the Fog, its cover marked with the same anchor-and-moon insignia that had haunted their investigation.

Declan picked it up, his jaw tightening as he flipped through its pages. Inside were detailed accounts of experiments conducted in Sugar Bay—studies on controlling the fog, harnessing its suffocating presence to keep the town isolated and its secrets buried. It wasn’t a natural phenomenon; it was a weapon.

“They created it,” Declan muttered, his voice low and sharp. “Whoever—or whatever—they are, they’re using it to hide something.”

Milinah’s grip tightened on the photograph, her knuckles white. “And Mariah got caught in it.”

 

The whispers grew louder, echoing through the underground chamber with a force that made Milinah shiver. She closed her eyes, letting the fragments of her sister’s voice guide her to another corner of the room where she found a rusted safe. Her breath caught as she traced her fingers over its surface, finding the initials “M.C.” scratched into the metal.

“It’s hers,” she whispered. “She left this for us.”

Declan knelt beside her, pulling out his lockpick set with practiced precision. The safe clicked open, revealing a stack of letters tied with twine and another photograph—this one showing Mariah standing alone at the edge of the cliffs near the lighthouse. She looked frightened, her eyes darting toward the fog as if she knew what was coming.

Milinah’s hands trembled as she read the first letter, Mariah’s handwriting scrawled in uneven lines. “They’re watching me,” it began. “I’m sorry, Mil, but I had to leave. They won’t let me stay, and I can’t put you in danger. I’ll be at the lighthouse tonight. Please don’t follow me.”

Her tears fell silently, splattering against the paper like raindrops. Declan rested a hand on her shoulder, his gaze hard as he scanned the letters for any mention of the anchor-and-moon organization. But there was nothing—just fragments of fear, regret, and love.

“She knew they’d come for her,” Declan said. “And she tried to protect you.”

Milinah nodded, her resolve hardening. “But they didn’t stop her. They didn’t stop me either. We’re going to finish this.”

 

 

Echoes – Part 2: Unseen Forces

The fog was worse than ever, a suffocating mass that swallowed the streets, drowning Sugar Bay in silence. Declan sat in his car outside the Carlyle boathouse, the engine idling low. His hand rested on the wheel, but his focus was on Milinah, who stood just a few feet away. The dim light from his headlamps softened her features, but her face was set with resolve. The book she clutched to her chest trembled slightly, whether from the chill or something deeper, he wasn’t sure.

“We’re sure about this?” Declan finally asked, his tone light but probing.

Milinah turned to him, her expression guarded. “You don’t have to be here if you’re not.”

Declan smirked faintly, shutting off the engine and stepping out of the car. The fog immediately closed around him, the scent of salt and decay heavy in the air. “Didn’t say I wasn’t. Just making sure you’re ready for whatever we find.”

Milinah’s fingers tightened on the book’s spine. “I have to be.”

The boathouse loomed before them, more corpse than structure. Its roof sagged under its own weight, and the timbers were streaked black from years of storms and neglect. Declan pushed open the creaking door, and the pair stepped inside, the fog lingering like an unwelcome guest.

The room was just as they’d left it, a mess of crates, ropes, and rotted nets scattered haphazardly. The air was damp, filled with the unmistakable tang of mildew. Declan swept his flashlight across the space, the beam catching on broken windows and the faint shimmer of standing water.

“There.” Milinah pointed toward the far wall, where the hidden staircase to the lower chamber waited. The whispers had returned the night before, relentless and clear. They had pressed a single command into her mind, drawing her back here, to this place.

“You first,” Declan said, his voice low. His flashlight stayed trained on the stairs as Milinah descended, her footsteps cautious but steady. He followed close behind, one hand on the revolver tucked in his coat.

 

The chamber below was colder, the air thick enough to choke on. The walls were slick with condensation, the faint sound of dripping water echoing in the gloom. At the center of the room stood the table they’d uncovered during their last visit, its surface littered with books, photographs, and fragments of papers. But tonight, something was different.

A new book sat on the table, its black cover gleaming faintly in the flashlight’s glow. Milinah’s breath caught as she approached it, the whispers in her mind amplifying until they were a roar. She reached out, hesitating for just a moment before her fingers brushed the book’s surface. The title was embossed in silver: The Last Witness.

Declan moved to her side, his gaze narrowing. “That wasn’t here before.”

Milinah opened the book, her hands trembling. The pages were filled with scrawled handwriting, names and locations interspersed with frantic notes. At the bottom of the first page, a single phrase was underlined: “The fog remembers.”

“What does it mean?” Milinah asked, her voice barely above a whisper.

Declan’s eyes scanned the page. “Nothing good.”

 

The air grew colder as they flipped through the book, each page unraveling a story of control and fear. The names were familiar—locals from Sugar Bay, people who had vanished without explanation or left town under strange circumstances. The fog wasn’t just a natural phenomenon; it was a weapon, wielded by unseen hands to keep the town silent.

“Mariah’s name is here,” Milinah whispered, pointing to an entry near the back. “And Ellis.”

Declan’s jaw tightened. “They knew her. They knew them both.”

The whispers surged again, louder this time, tugging at Milinah like an invisible force. She turned toward the far wall, her flashlight catching on a narrow passageway she hadn’t noticed before. The whispers pressed her forward, drawing her into the darkness.

“Wait,” Declan called, but she was already moving.

 

The passageway was tight, the walls pressing in on either side. The whispers grew clearer with each step, their words sharp and urgent. Declan kept close, his flashlight cutting through the dark. At the end of the passage was another door, this one newer, its surface smooth and unblemished. Milinah reached for the handle, hesitating.

“Do you hear it?” she asked.

Declan shook his head, his eyes fixed on the door. “Hear what?”

“The whispers,” she said, her voice trembling. “It’s her, Declan. It’s Mariah.”

She pushed the door open, revealing a room that was startlingly well-preserved. The walls were lined with bookshelves, each crammed with tomes that looked ancient and fragile. At the center of the room was a pedestal, and atop it rested a single book, its cover blank.

Milinah approached it slowly, the whispers intensifying with each step. She reached out, her fingers brushing the book’s surface. The whispers stopped.

Declan moved to her side, his flashlight scanning the room. “What is this place?”

Milinah opened the book, revealing a single line written in stark black ink: “The fog binds us all. Do not seek what lies beyond.”

A chill ran down Declan’s spine as the air grew heavy, the fog seeping into the room through cracks in the walls. He turned toward the door, his instincts screaming danger.

“Milinah, we need to leave. Now.”

 

The fog thickened, curling around their feet and rising fast. The whispers returned, this time different—angrier. Declan drew his revolver, aiming it at the doorway as a shadow moved within the mist.

“Whatever’s here,” he said, his voice low and steady, “it doesn’t want us leaving.”

Milinah clutched the book to her chest, her gaze darting toward the shadow. “It’s her. Declan, it’s Mariah.”

“No,” Declan said firmly. “Whatever that is, it’s not your sister.”

The shadow stepped closer, its form becoming clearer. It was humanoid, but its movements were unnatural, jerky, and disjointed. Declan fired a warning shot, the sound deafening in the enclosed space. The shadow recoiled, but the fog pressed in tighter, suffocating and relentless.

“Move!” Declan shouted, grabbing Milinah’s arm and pulling her toward the door.

They stumbled back into the passageway, the fog chasing them like a living thing. The whispers grew deafening, a cacophony of anger and sorrow that pushed them forward. They reached the main chamber, the air clearing just enough to catch their breath.

Milinah turned to Declan, her eyes wide with fear. “What was that?”

Declan didn’t answer. He didn’t have one. All he knew was that whatever they’d found in the boathouse wasn’t finished with them.

 

 

Echoes – Part 2: Into the Depths

The fog rolled in like an army, its tendrils snaking through the cracks in the cliff side, swirling with a purpose that felt anything but natural. Mariah stood at the edge, the sharp wind tugging at her coat and hair as she scanned the horizon. Her arms were crossed tightly against the chill, but her thoughts were elsewhere. Ellis had said he'd be here by now. She glanced back at the old lighthouse behind her, its shadow looming over the rocks like some ancient sentinel. But the building offered no comfort, only more unease.

The creak of footsteps on the rocky trail made her turn sharply, her pulse quickening—but it wasn’t Ellis. A man stumbled toward her, his heavy boots clumsy on the uneven ground. The reek of alcohol carried on the wind, even from a distance. His face was slack, his eyes unfocused, and his words slurred as he muttered something inaudible.

“Hey,” the sailor called out, his voice rough. “What’s a girl like you doin’ out here alone?”

Mariah backed up instinctively, glancing around for some sign of Ellis, but he was nowhere to be found. “I’m waiting for someone,” she said, her tone sharp but uncertain. “You should keep moving.”

But the sailor staggered closer, his hand outstretched. “Wait now… don’t be like that. You shouldn’t be out here… Not safe. Not with the fog…”

The fog answered his words before she could. It surged forward, a living thing, coiling around his legs with inhuman speed. Mariah gasped, her hands flying to her mouth as she stumbled back. The sailor screamed—a terrible, ragged sound that carried over the cliffs as the fog climbed him like a predator. He swung his arms wildly, trying to claw it away, but there was nothing to grab, nothing to fight. His scream cut off abruptly, and when the fog receded, it was as if he had never been there.

Mariah’s breath came in short, panicked gasps as the fog shifted again, this time toward her. She tried to run, but her legs wouldn’t move. Her body was frozen in terror, her hands raised defensively as if they could hold back the impossible.

“No,” she whispered, barely audible over the roar of the wind. “Please, no—”

The fog consumed her in a blink, her scream echoing briefly before being swallowed whole. And then, just as quickly as it had come, the fog withdrew, dragging itself out to sea like a wave retreating from the shore. The cliffs were empty.

But where Mariah had stood, something remained. A book, its black leather surface gleaming faintly in the dim light, lay on the ground. The silver bracket locking it shut glinted ominously, its untitled cover daring anyone to pick it up.

 

Present Day

Declan slammed the selector into drive, his jaw set tight as the fog slammed into the side of the car like a battering ram. The vehicle rocked violently, its weight the only thing keeping it grounded as the mist clawed at them. Milinah clutched the dashboard, her breath coming in shallow bursts. The whispers surrounded them, more guttural now, more desperate.

“Hold on,” Declan muttered, pressing the gas hard. The car lurched forward, its headlights cutting through the dense fog as they sped down the dark, winding road. The engine growled, straining against the incline, but Declan didn’t ease up. The fog followed, clinging to the rear windshield like a shadow that wouldn’t let go.

Finally, the mist began to thin, the headlights finding solid ground again as the road straightened out. Declan didn’t stop until they were back at the café, the familiar sight of its flickering sign like a beacon in the dark. He parked the car, cutting the engine, but neither of them moved at first.

The silence stretched as they sat there, the adrenaline slowly ebbing. Milinah’s hands were shaking, her gaze fixed on the fog still curling at the edges of the streetlights.

Declan broke the silence first. “Well, that was exciting,” he said dryly, though his hands were gripping the wheel tighter than he realized.

Milinah let out a short, humorless laugh, her breath still uneven. “What the hell was that, Declan? What is this fog? It’s not just… it’s alive. It’s something.”

Declan didn’t answer immediately. He opened the door and stepped out, lighting a cigarette with a practiced flick of his lighter. Milinah followed, and they walked back inside the café. The warmth of the space felt almost jarring after the cold dread outside.

Inside, they settled into a booth in the corner. The stack of books they’d collected sat on the side table next to them, their presence a silent challenge. Declan poured himself a cup of coffee from the pot on the table, his expression unreadable.

“This was a trap from the start,” he said finally, his tone measured. “The books, the clues, the whispers—they weren’t just leading us to answers. They were playing with us.”

Milinah nodded, her hands wrapped tightly around her own cup. “Then why leave a trail at all? If it’s toying with us, it wants us to find something. Or it wants us to… to get too close.”

Declan didn’t respond, his eyes narrowing as he reached for the nearest book. They worked in silence for the next hour, the only sounds the occasional scrape of paper or the soft hiss of the streetlamp outside. Milinah sifted through brittle pages, her fingers careful but swift, until something fell free—a scrap of parchment. It fluttered onto the table like an omen.

“What’s that?” Declan asked, leaning forward.

Milinah picked it up, her brow furrowing as she examined the faint scrawling on its surface. Letters and numbers, written in an unsteady hand. “It looks like coordinates,” she said, handing it to Declan.

He pulled out a magnifying glass, tilting it until the faint script came into focus. The words etched across the parchment sent a chill through him as he read them aloud: “Where land ends, the sea begins. Beware the fog.”

Below the warning were the coordinates. Declan traced them with his finger, his mind working fast. “This could be it,” he said, meeting Milinah’s eyes. “The source. Whatever’s controlling the fog, it’s leading us here.”

Milinah nodded, determination hardening her features. “Then let’s go.”

Declan’s lips curved into a faint, humorless smile. “Let’s hope we’re ready.

Echoes – Part 3: Where the Fog Ends

The cliffs stood silent, the lighthouse casting its broken shadow across the jagged rocks below. The fog swirled thicker than ever, an impenetrable wall stretching into the horizon and blotting out the stars. Declan and Milinah stood shoulder to shoulder, their breath visible in the frigid air. The coordinates had led them here—back to the edge of Sugar Bay, where sea met stone and secrets refused to stay buried.

“This is it,” Declan muttered, his voice barely audible over the crashing waves. His flashlight cut weakly through the dense mist, but there was nothing to see. Just the emptiness of the fog, endless and unyielding.

Milinah tightened her grip on the book clutched to her chest. “She’s here,” she said quietly, her voice tinged with both hope and fear. “I can feel it.”

Declan glanced at her, his expression unreadable but focused. “Stay close,” he said. “We don’t know what this thing is—or what it wants.”

The wind picked up, carrying with it a faint sound—soft, melodic, and achingly familiar. Milinah froze, her breath catching in her throat. It was humming, gentle and lilting, the same tune Mariah used to sing when they were children. Tears welled in her eyes as she turned toward the fog, her voice trembling. “Mariah?”

The fog shifted, curling inward like smoke being drawn to a flame. It moved with unnatural speed, coalescing into a shape—a figure—at the center of the mist. Declan instinctively reached for his revolver, his jaw tightening, but he didn’t draw it. Something about the figure stopped him—a presence that felt less threatening and more… human.

And then the fog parted, revealing her.

Mariah Carlyle stepped forward, her silhouette outlined by the faint glow of the lighthouse beam. She looked exactly as she had the night she vanished—her dark hair loose and windswept, her dress fluttering softly in the wind. She gazed around in awe, her eyes wide as if she were waking from a dream. When she saw Milinah, her expression broke, and she ran to her, her arms outstretched.

“Mil,” Mariah cried, her voice cracking with emotion.

Milinah stumbled forward, dropping the book as she closed the distance. They collided in an embrace, Mariah’s arms wrapping tightly around her younger sister. Milinah held her just as fiercely, her tears streaming freely as she clung to the sister she had thought was lost forever.

“I thought… I thought I’d never see you again,” Milinah whispered, her voice trembling.

Mariah pulled back just enough to look at her, her hands framing Milinah’s face. “It felt like only a moment,” she said softly. “I… I don’t understand. Where am I?”

Declan stepped forward then, his expression wary but relieved. He tilted his hat back slightly, nodding toward Mariah. “Welcome to 1943,” he said. “It’s been 14 years since you vanished into the sea.”

Mariah’s breath hitched, her eyes searching his for answers she didn’t know how to ask. She looked back at Milinah, her voice faltering. “Fourteen years?”

Milinah nodded, brushing tears from her cheeks. “You’ve been gone so long, Mariah. I’ve missed you… I’ve missed you so much.”

Mariah hugged her again, burying her face in Milinah’s shoulder. “I’m sorry,” she whispered. “I didn’t mean to leave… I don’t know what happened. The fog—it took me, and then… I don’t remember.”

Declan cleared his throat, pulling their attention. “We’ll figure it out,” he said firmly. “Right now, let’s get you both somewhere warm. That fog might’ve let you go, but it’s still out there.”

 

The Sidewalk Café buzzed faintly with life, its cozy glow spilling onto the cobblestone streets. Inside, the three of them sat in a booth by the window, the warmth of the room a stark contrast to the cold dread of the cliffs. Mariah sipped a steaming cup of tea, her hands trembling slightly as she tried to process everything.

Declan leaned back in his seat, his hat resting on the table beside him. He watched the two sisters quietly, his sharp gaze softened by the faintest hint of a smile. It wasn’t often he saw a case end this way—hopeful, with no bodies to mourn, no lingering ghosts to haunt.

Milinah couldn’t stop staring at her sister, her eyes drinking in every detail as if afraid Mariah might vanish again. “You’re exactly the same,” she said finally, her voice filled with wonder. “You haven’t aged a day.”

Mariah blinked, looking down at her hands. “It’s like… like I stepped out of one moment and into another. But the world kept moving without me.”

Declan leaned forward, his elbows resting on the table. “The fog let you go,” he said. “For whatever reason, it decided your time was up. Question is—why now?”

Mariah shook her head, her brow furrowing. “I don’t know,” she admitted. “But… it felt alive. Like it was watching me, keeping me. And then, suddenly, it wasn’t.”

Milinah reached across the table, taking her sister’s hand in hers. “Whatever it was, it brought you back to me. That’s all that matters.”

Declan smirked faintly, lifting his coffee mug. “To second chances,” he said, raising it in a toast.

Milinah and Mariah smiled, clinking their cups against his. For the first time in years, the weight of Sugar Bay’s mysteries felt lighter. The fog would always hold its secrets, but for now, they had found something more precious than answers—each other.

As laughter and warmth filled the café, the fog outside began to lift, pulling back from the streets like a tide retreating from the shore. For a moment, Sugar Bay felt almost normal, the shadows giving way to light.

 

 

 

 

 

Thursday, March 27, 2025

Sugar Bay, Whispers Pt 2 of 5

Sugar Bay wasn’t much to look at on a map. Another coastal town tucked between cliffs and an endless stretch of waves. But for those who lived there, it was a place with a history as tangled and deep as the fog that rolled in each night. The streets were cobblestone in some parts, cracked asphalt in others. Lined with lampposts that flickered just enough to make you wonder what was lurking in the shadows.

Declan Cross fit somewhere in the middle—too sharp to be taken lightly, too rough around the edges to belong. Sugar Bay had started as a place to hide. As the days passed, it began to feel like the kind of town that chose you, not the other way around. 



The Sidewalk Café

Declan found himself at a sidewalk café, a modest corner spot that smelled like fresh coffee and sea salt. The iron-wrought tables wobbled. Nothing in Sugar Bay ever seemed balanced. He slouched into a seat beneath the striped awning, lit a cigarette, and kept a watchful eye on the street.



The waitress appeared before he noticed her. For a second, he forgot about the cigarette burning between his fingers. She was stunning—dark, flowing hair tied into a loose braid. Warm brown eyes that shimmered like polished mahogany, and a hint of a smile that could melt an iceberg.



“What’ll it be?” she asked, her voice light but carrying an edge that said she didn’t take nonsense from anyone.



Declan flicked ash from his cigarette, leaning back in his chair. “Black coffee, two sugars. And if you’ve got a slice of that lemon pie, I’ll take that, too.”



Her smile widened. “Black coffee, two sugars... just sweet enough to make you think you’re not drinking tar. Got it. And lemon pie? You seem like more of a whiskey man.”



“I am,” Declan replied, his grin faint but there. “But whiskey doesn’t go well with pie. You got a name to go with that attitude, or is this how service works in Sugar Bay?”



She tilted her head, arching an eyebrow. “Milinah. And you must be the infamous Mr. Cross. People around here have a way of talking about the new guy.”



Declan smirked, extinguishing the cigarette. “Infamous already? That’s quick work. Guess I make an impression.”



“That, or people like gossip,” she said, tapping her notepad. “Anything else?”



“Depends. You gonna tell me what people are saying?”



She laughed softly. “Next time. For now, I’ll get your order.”



As she turned and disappeared into the café, Declan let out a breath he didn’t realize he’d been holding. There was something about her—not just her beauty, but the way she carried herself. Her magnetism didn’t rely on the world's approval.



A few minutes later, she returned, balancing a tray with his coffee and pie. Her smile was gone, replaced by something heavier—serious and solemn. She placed the coffee in front of him, her eyes locked onto his.



“Mr. Cross,” she said softly, leaning slightly closer. “I need your help.”



Declan straightened, suddenly alert. “Something wrong?”



She hesitated, glancing down at the tray before looking back up at him. “My sister. She disappeared 14 years ago. No one knows what happened, and the police—they barely tried. The case went cold. But there were things... things that don’t make sense. I need someone who can see through the lies.”



Declan studied her, the weight of her words settling between them. There was a vulnerability in her eyes, but also resolve. He saw the same thing he always saw when someone came to him—hope, desperation, and a little bit of fear.



“Tell me everything you know,” he said, his voice steady but softer than usual.



Milinah sat down across from him, clutching the edge of the tray as though steadying herself. She told him about her sister—Mariah—who had been 17 when she vanished. Mariah was supposed to meet a friend that night but never showed. The last place anyone saw her was near the old lighthouse at the edge of town. The police had found nothing—no clues, no suspects, just a void where a girl used to be.



“People say things,” Milinah continued, her voice breaking. “About the fog that night. About someone—or something—that was waiting for her. But no one will talk. Not even now.”



Declan’s jaw tightened. He didn’t believe in ghosts or curses. He’d seen enough in his line of work to know that some secrets didn’t need superstition to stay buried.



“You’re serious about this?” he asked, watching her carefully.



She nodded. “You’re my last hope. Please.”



Declan leaned back and let out a slow breath, the weight of the moment settling over him. Against his better judgment, something about this case pulled at him. Maybe it was her earnest sincerity, or perhaps it was the way her eyes lingered on him. Filled with a quiet hope that he might actually be the solution she was searching for. Whatever it was, the decision was already made.



“I’ll take the case,” he said, his tone firm. “But I’m gonna need details. Everything you can remember, and then some.”



Milinah’s shoulders sagged slightly, relief washing over her. “Thank you, Mr. Cross.”



“Call me Declan,” he said with a faint smile. “Looks like we’ve got some ghosts to chase.”



Shadows in the Fog – The Lighthouse

The lighthouse stood at the edge of Sugar Bay like a sentry that had long abandoned its post. The jagged cliffs stretched beneath it.  

plunging into the restless ocean that churned far below. Declan parked his car near the winding trail that led to the lighthouse.  He stepped out into the brisk coastal air. The fog hung lower here, thin wisps curling at his feet like they were waiting for him.



The lighthouse itself was weatherworn. Its white paint peeling in strips, revealing the gray stone underneath. Its once-bright lantern had long since gone dark. In its dilapidated state, it loomed larg. A towering presence that felt more like a tombstone than a beacon



Declan shoved his hands into his coat pockets. His fingers brushed against the weight of The Gatekeeper’s Clock. Milinah’s words echoed in his mind—about her sister’s disappearance. About the whispers that had followed, and about this place.



The trail crunched under his boots as he walked closer. The wind carrying a faint hum through the cracked boards and broken windows. He stopped short of the entrance. Studying the heavy wooden door with its corroded brass handle. There were no footprints in the damp soil—no signs that anyone had passed through recently.



Declan pressed a hand to the door and pushed it open, the hinges groaning under the effort. The air inside was cold and carried the sharp scent of salt and decay. He aimed his flashlight around the space, revealing cobwebs stretched across the wall. Dust that danced in the light beam.



The lighthouse interior was a hollowed-out shell. The spiral staircase wound upward, its steps uneven and warped. Old equipment lay scattered across the floor. Oil lamps, broken gauges, fragments of rope. It was a graveyard of forgotten tools and forgotten people.



Declan crouched near the base of the staircase, his flashlight catching something metallic. He reached out, brushing aside the dirt to uncover a rusted bracelet. It was tarnished, but the small charm still attached bore the initials “M.C.”



Declan’s jaw tightened. Milinah had mentioned. Her sister had worn a bracelet with her initials the night she vanished. He slipped the piece into his pocket, rising slowly to scan the rest of the room.



The silence was heavy, broken only by the creak of the lighthouse walls shifting under the wind. As Declan moved toward the staircase, his flashlight caught faint scuff marks along the steps. Marks that suggested someone had climbed them long ago. Declan followed the trail, climbing the stairs cautiously. Each step groaned under his weight, threatening to give way.



When he reached the top, the room felt colder. The shattered lantern sat in the center, surrounded by scattered debris and dark stains that had seeped into the floorboards. Declan aimed his flashlight downward, narrowing his eyes at the marks. They looked like footprints, faded but still discernible.



Declan crouched to examine them, his pulse quickening. They weren’t recent—maybe fourteen years old, maybe older. They told him that Mariah Carlyle had been here, and she hadn’t left willingly.



The wind howled louder, rattling the lighthouse’s broken windows. Declan rose, his grip tightening on the flashlight as he looked out toward the ocean. The waves crashed against the cliffs below, relentless and unforgiving.



He felt it then—a faint vibration underfoot, almost imperceptible. He glanced down, shining the light across the floor. The marks seemed to converge in one spot, a place where the boards sank slightly. As though something heavy had rested there.



Declan nudged the spot with his boot, the wood creaking under the pressure. He crouched again, this time pushing harder. The plank shifted slightly, revealing a hollow space beneath. His heart quickened as he set the flashlight aside and pulled at the board with his hands. It came loose with a sharp crack, exposing a hidden compartment.



Inside was a photograph—aged, its edges curled and frayed. He held it under the light, staring at the image of Mariah Carlyle. Her arm draped around a man whose face had been torn out of the picture.



Declan exhaled slowly, his mind racing. Whoever Mariah had met here, she hadn’t planned to vanish. She had been taken—by someone who knew this lighthouse and its secrets.



Declan pocketed the photo and descended the staircase.  His grip tightening on the railing as the wind seemed to push harder against the walls. By the time he reached the ground floor, the fog had crept into the lighthouse. Coiling like smoke around his feet.



As he stepped back outside, he glanced toward the cliff’s edge, narrowing his eyes at a faint silhouette in the distance. It vanished as quickly as he saw it, leaving him unsettled. Sugar Bay had ghosts—and Declan was starting to think Milinah’s sister was one of them.



Shadows in the Fog – Uncovering the Past

The letters burned a hole in Declan’s pocket as he left the Sugar Bay Hotel. Each one was a fragment of a story. Ellis’s desperate attempts to escape the town with Mariah. Thwarted by something or someone they couldn’t fight. The wind picked up, tugging at Declan’s coat as he strode back to his car, his mind racing.



Ellis had been scared, enough to hide his words in a rusted safe and leave behind nothing but whispers. The clues pointed to someone else pulling the strings, someone who had been watching. Declan needed to know who—or what—Ellis had been running from.



The Carlyle Family Legacy

Declan’s first stop was Sugar Bay’s archives. The Carlyle name carried weight in this town. A family grounded in its foundations. Wielding enough wealth and influence to keep their secrets buried. If anyone in Mariah's orbit had known about Ellis, it would have been her family.



The archives were quiet, the smell of old paper and ink hanging heavy in the air. Declan sifted through dusty records and faded photographs.  He pieced together fragments of the Carlyle story. They had been prominent in Sugar Bay for generations. Building their fortune on shipping and trade. There were gaps. Years where records didn’t align. Entire pieces of their history had vanished.



It wasn’t until he found an old news article tucked away in the back of a file that the pieces began to shift. The headline read: “Suspicious Disappearance of Carlyle Employee Sparks Scandal.” The article was dated three years before Mariah vanished. It mentioned an unnamed man. An employee of the Carlyle family—who had disappeared under unexplained circumstances. No body was ever found, and the case had been closed.



The photograph accompanying the article was grainy, but Declan’s stomach dropped. The man in the image had a familiar build. His face was obscured by shadows. The coat he wore matched Ellis's description.



The Docks at Night

The lead brought Declan back to the docks that evening. The salt air stung his skin as he approached the spot where Ellis had once worked. The waves crashed against the piers. Their sound masking the creaks of old wood beneath his boots.



Declan approached one of the older warehouses. Its doors chained shut but its windows cracked and broken. He climbed through one of the gaps, his flashlight cutting through the darkness. The interior smelled of oil and rust, and the faint squeak of rats echoed in the corners.



As he moved deeper inside, his beam caught something unusual—a pile of old crates stacked in the far corner. Declan brushed away the dust,. His pulse quickening as he uncovered a hidden compartment in the floor. Inside was a leather-bound journal, its edges worn and its cover faded.



Declan opened it, his breath catching at the first page. The entries were written in a rushed, uneven hand—Ellis’s hand. The journal chronicled his final weeks. Detailing his growing paranoia and his attempts to protect Mariah.



Ellis’s Final Words

"They’re watching. Every move I make, they know. Mariah doesn’t understand—it’s not her family, it’s something bigger. The fog isn’t weather. It’s them. They know everything that happens in Sugar Bay because they’re part of it. They won’t let us leave, and they won’t let her go. If anyone finds this, tell her I didn’t run. I stayed to fight for her."



Declan closed the journal, his grip tightening. Ellis was scared, but he had been certain about one thing. Mariah’s disappearance hadn’t been an accident. Someone, or something, had orchestrated it, using the fog as their veil.



As Declan tucked the journal into his coat, a faint creak echoed through the warehouse. He froze, his hand hovering near his revolver. The sound came again, closer this time, followed by the faint shuffle of footsteps.



Declan turned, his flashlight sweeping the room. The beam caught a figure in the shadows—a man, dressed in dark clothes, his face obscured by the brim of a hat. Declan’s heart raced as the man stepped forward, his movements deliberate and silent.



“You’re poking around where you shouldn’t be,” the man said, his voice low and gravelly. “Ellis learned that the hard way. Don’t make the same mistake.”



Declan didn’t flinch, his grip tightening on the flashlight. “You know what happened to him.”



The man’s smile was faint, “I know what happens to anyone who tries to leave the fog.”



And like that, the man turned and disappeared into the shadows. Leaving Declan standing alone in the cold, empty warehouse.



Shadows in the Fog – Piecing It Together

Declan sat at his desk, the soft glow of a lamp cutting through the haze of cigarette smoke that filled the room. V



The journal entry gnawed at him—the mention of 'them' and the fog refusing to loosen its grip on his thoughts. It tied back to the hidden compartment in the lighthouse. The bloodstained floorboards. The torn photograph of a man Ellis swore had been watching them. All the clues converged on one undeniable truth: Mariah's fate was no accident. It had been meticulously planned.



Declan picked up the photograph again. Focusing on the torn edge where the man’s face had been ripped away. It wasnst anger or grief that had driven someone to mutilate the picture—it was a need to erase, to hide. The initials on the letters—“M”—stood for Mariah, sure, but what if they also stood for someone else? Someone Ellis trusted and Mariah feared?



He reached for the bracelet, turning it over . The small charm dangling from it caught the lamplight, glinting faintly. He hadn’t noticed it before, but there was a subtle etching on the back—tiny, almost imperceptible. He pulled out his magnifying glass, bringing it closer. The marking was a symbol: an anchor entwined with a crescent moon. It was delicate but deliberate. The kind of thing that carried a meaning only insiders understood.



Declan’s fingers brushed the letters again, specifically Ellis’s words. “They know everything that happens in Sugar Bay because they’re part of it. They won’t let us leave.” The fog wasn’t just weather—it was an extension of their control. The anchor-and-moon symbol was likely tied to a group with deep roots in the town. Maybe even the Carlyle family itself.



A Dangerous Revelation

Mariah—and the force keeping them trapped in Sugar Bay—wasn’t just one person. It was a network. The anchor-and-moon symbol traced back to an ancient organization. Once Declan pieced it all together, he realized the person watching Ellis was a shadow of something greater. A presence whose influence had shaped Sugar Bay for generations. Smuggling, control over trade routes, and secrets. They kept people in line, and anyone who tried to break free paid the price.



Mariah had been caught in the crosshairs. Because she learned something she wasn’t supposed to. Ellis, though desperate to protect her, had unknowingly led her into the storm by trying to escape with her.



Declan’s chest tightened as the realization sank in. The fog wasn’t just a veil over the town; it was a metaphor for the silence and fear that kept people in their place. Mariah hadn’t vanished into nothingness—she had been silenced, erased by those who saw her as a threat.



But why? What had she uncovered that made her dangerous?



A Heartfelt Decision

Declan gathered the evidence and headed back to the café to meet Milinah. She was waiting at the same table as before. Her shoulders hunched and her hands wrapped around a mug of untouched coffee. When she saw him approach, her eyes filled with something between hope and dread.



He slid into the seat across from her. Setting the bracelet, photograph, and letters on the table. Her hand trembled as she picked up the bracelet, tears pooling in her eyes as she recognized the charm.



“She didn’t disappear,” Declan began, his voice steady but low. “Someone made her vanish. There’s a group here, Milinah—one that’s been pulling strings in Sugar Bay for years. Mariah got caught in their net because she knew something. Ellis tried to save her, but...”



He trailed off, unsure how to soften the blow.



“She didn’t make it, did she?” Milinah whispered, clutching the bracelet.



Declan hesitated, then shook his head. “I don’t think so. But I can find out exactly what happened. And I can make sure it doesn’t stay buried.”



Milinah looked up, her tearful eyes locking onto his. “Why are you doing this? Why do you care?”



Declan leaned back, exhaling. “Because someone has to. And because your sister deserves the truth.”



The Fog Lifts

Declan spent the next few days unraveling the organization behind the anchor-and-moon symbol. Digging through the town’s darkest corners. He found traces of their influence everywhere.  Backroom deals, whispered alliances, and secrets kept under lock and key. Mariah had stumbled onto something big. Evidence of smuggling operations that tied the Carlyles to the mysterious group. She had planned to expose it, but they got to her first.



Declan delivered what he found to Milinah—a story of love, betrayal, and power that had cost Mariah her life. The truth was painful, but it brought closure. Milinah finally knew what had happened to her sister. With Declan’s help, she began the process of seeking justice.



Shadows in the Fog – The Last Shadow

Declan stood on the cliff overlooking Sugar Bay. The remnants of the town’s fog swirling around the jagged coastline. Below, the waves thundered against the rocks, relentless as time itself. He lit his last cigarette and took a slow drag, watching the smoke curl upward before the wind snatched it away.



The truth about Mariah Carlyle had shattered the silence that hung over Sugar Bay. Exposing the rot beneath its surface. Ellis’s words, the torn photograph, the letters. —all pieces of a story that pointed to the shadowy organization pulling strings in the town. Declan had brought some light to the mystery, but there was still work to be done. He wasn’t ready to leave—not until he dismantled the group that had kept Sugar Bay in its grip for generations.



He thought of Milinah as he exhaled, the smoke drifting out across the dark sky. She had been stronger than he’d expected, fighting through her pain to uncover the truth about her sister. There was something about her—a quiet resilience that drew him in, deeper than he wanted to admit. He didn’t just want to help her. He wanted to see her again, to know what made her tick, to understand the fire in her. Which refused to fade even in the face of darkness.



Declan smirked faintly. Flicking the cigarette away as the wind carried the ember out over the cliff’s edge. Sugar Bay had chosen him, and for now, he’d chosen it back. The fog may have lifted tonight, but he knew it would return. Persistent as the secrets that lingered in the shadows. And so would he.



Pulling his coat tighter, Declan turned and began walking back toward town. His thoughts lingering on Milinah. She was more than a client, more than a name attached to a case. She was the kind of person who made you want to stick around, even when the smart thing to do was run. Declan wasn’t the running type. Not anymore.